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on Nighttime Secrets, Part One
Nov 13, 13:45
I think that the line sticks because it adds some realism and brings a new and different dimension to the story and makes us readers feel like it could be almost a real truth life recounting of those events we find in your newst story here. Whatever you found in how you wrote this last story of your’s was great and hope you can find it again and again. It was superb.
on How I Spent My Summer Vacation, Part Two
Nov 13, 13:33
OMG, I sure missed something. It was going to be two parts originally. The conversation with the narrator and Ms Rubinoff and their future plans would have been the end. I’d had the Narrator and her mother having sex as the first twist, and the ending with the teacher having a talk about it with the Narrator being the second twist and the ending. My co-authors,and I think rightly so, added the actual band camp story of Rose, and thankfully embellished Rose and the Narrators romance. I’m supposed to take care of continuity and names and ages, and as you pointed out correctly, the action does suddenly shift from playground to bedroom. I could have sworn I had a transition, but I must have lost it in the shuffle, and my hurry to write out the third part. The third part, fingers crossed it will be seen someday like the rest of Night Time Secrets, is all my fault. JetBoy had added a little ending telling about upcoming sex, and I felt that it was really an outline for a third part instead of an ending. I’ll say the clock could have been on the school building at the playground. Also JB and Cariad beefed up the part with the Narrator and her mother and sister. They also very nicely embellished a lot of things in part one. My thanks to them again, and any faults are on me. I don’t think I’ll ask for the glitch for transporting to be fixed though. JetBoy of course has enough going on, and since you’re the only one to seem to catch I’ll let it go. I recall reading one story here over and over and it wasn’t till after I don’t know how many reads I saw one tiny error. Maybe when JS resurrects again,sorry for the blaspheme, we’ll sort it out. I’ll be more careful with part 3 if and when it happens.
Nov 13, 13:29
What is A03 or AO3? Never heard of it. Could we have the URL link to check it out. Thanks.
Nov 13, 13:26
If that is the case why is Nifty’s URL nifty.org/nifty. Was JS on this “.org” host. If it being the case where JS and Nifty were on the same host, very sadly it seems like someone has a vendetta against JS. Is a host really needed? I guess that it would be too expensive, and very much more work to run their own servers and host themselves. Just a thought.
on The Joy of Looking, Chapter 56
Nov 13, 09:47
Oh my God… this chapter is even better! That conversation on the date… that beautiful declaration of love! (Honestly, Naughty Mommy, that declaration of love is the most beautiful one I’ve ever read!) Your work deserves as much attention as Harry Potter! The books that get published don’t even come close to having the wonderful talent you have! You write so beautifully… so sensually… so romantically! Now I’m totally in love with both of them… Suzanne and Julie!) The conversation between Suzanne and Julie is sooo beautifully romantic. I had to cry – it was so moving to hear the words Suzanne used to confess her deep love for Julie. Julie is incredibly lucky. Oh, I hope the two of them get married later on! 😀 Now that Suzanne has confided her deepest secrets and her love to her daughter, you can tell that Suzanne is much more relaxed and sexually open-minded… she seems so happy because she’s in love with Julie. That’s wonderful! Honestly, it’s bloody brilliant! (As I mentioned before… you’re the one who should be getting the attention… not J.K. Rowling) A thousand thanks for this steamy, loving chapter. It’s definitely one of my favourite chapters
Nov 13, 07:11
Wow, what a touching, romantic chapter. At last!! At last, Julie and her mum are being honest with each other. At the start, I was struck once again by just how scared Julie was… of talking to her mum about Molly. Julie and her mum had agreed they could talk about anything, and Julie had done just that so many times before. Suzanne’s initial negative reaction is telling. I think Suzanne is ashamed of her sexual love for Molly… she’s even ashamed in front of her daughter Julie… Suzanne confirms that she was being hypocritical. That hits the nail on the head. At last, Julie and Suzanne had an honest, open conversation! They absolutely must have this conversation with Kate and Molly later too, otherwise it’s unfair. At last, thanks to her incredible intelligence, Julie is able to convince her mother that mother-daughter love is nothing wrong. It’s lovely that Suzanne sees it that way too! I think this is one of my favourite chapters… because I’ve been waiting for this conversation for a long time. It’s very intense and steamy how Suzanne wants to do everything sexually with Julie. I understand that she wants to make the first time something special. Brilliantly written! Thank you, Naughty Mommy
on How I Spent My Summer Vacation, Part Two
Nov 13, 02:04
This sure is an action-packed story. It has plenty of hot scenes, but I admit that personally, perhaps like craw2519, I find stories that are just everyone fucking at the drop of a hat without rhyme or reason to be a bit lacking. It’s still a fun one, mind you, and there’s nothing wrong with a pure “fuck” story, but even in that context, a little bit of character work can go a long way. It seems like a strange decision to put the chapter break mid-conversation, though. There was plenty of action in chapter 1, the meeting with Rose could have been wholly in this chapter. It looks like it led to a little scene mix-up, too. At the beginning of the conversation with Rose last chapter, they are sitting on swings at the playground. Unless I really missed something, when they start having sex in this chapter, they’ve teleported to Rose’s bedroom! A useful talent, but probably not what was intended. 🙂 Maybe the confusion isn’t related to the chapter break, actually, because at the end of chapter 1, Rose “glances up at the clock”, which seems like an unusual thing to have in a playground, but not impossible I guess. Now I’m kinda curious about the development of the story, too. You said it was originally just a single page? And then it grew to two chapters (I assume the ones we’ve just read), and then you added a third one? I wonder, what parts were the original story, and what elements did JetBoy and Cariad contribute?
Nov 13, 01:16
Thanks a lot for the kind words, Purple Les, Jaz, and Enby. With recent events, the schedule has been derailed a bit, but I hope we can get back on track very soon.
Nov 13, 01:10
JS was already on the same host as Nifty, and yet here we are…
Nov 13, 01:09
All authors are free to publish their stories on AO3 as well. I do with mine. JetBoy can’t just upload other people’s work without permission, though.
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 12, 21:15
Yikes, so soon after we just got back! They better refund y’all after wasting your time like this. Here’s hoping you’re back soon!
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 12, 21:08
Thank you for all the effort spent keeping the site online. I was wondering if you and the authors might consider backing up the library on archiveofourown. The site is down right now, but it would be nice to know that the stories here won’t be lost forever if the worst happens.
on Two Moms, Chapter 15
Nov 12, 20:51
“Oh my god, that is so fucking hot,” she said. “That’s so hot, and so fucking great. I can’t believe it!” Mmm… my thoughts exactly… so fucking sexy! Thank you so much Naughty Mom for your skilful storytelling and your delicious incestuous forbidden fruit. Love you for it!
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 12, 16:20
I’ll look for you in the virtual world as you serve a purpose in my head!
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 12, 14:42
Well that sucks, and doing it after you just paid them is a really low move. We appreciate all your efforts though, keep fighting, and resurrecting the site and we’ll keep contributing and supporting. If I may add my penny’s worth for the new site…don’t have any photos at all. Keep it 100% literature. We’re here for the stories anyway. See you on the other side… Joe
Nov 12, 14:24
Bryan; thanks, rushed? or jam packed? Sarah34 ; thanks, not sure of the difference between fantasies and stories, the stories here are all fantasies.
on Nighttime Secrets, Part One
Nov 12, 14:02
Yes, the writing is so good! Cue my Super Orgasm! Thanks!
Nov 12, 13:53
Oh my God, this is even hotter! Naughty Mommy, how do you manage to make every chapter even more arousing? This chapter is one of my favourites… maybe even the best in your entire work? Because, oh my God, Suzanne finally gives Kate and Julie permission to give themselves over to incestuous love… sooo bloody hot! I absolutely adore Suzanne here. You’ve written her brilliantly. And Julie and Kate are a dream! So sweet, in love and passionate. I think it’s lovely that Julie falls in love with Kate. I… am absolutely thrilled. How I’d love to be part of this loving family! I think the world would be a better place if everyone loved their children as lovingly and passionately as Suzanne does… let’s be honest! Beautiful… I had to cry with emotion and arousal… so beautiful. Thank you, Naughty Mommy :
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 12, 13:27
You might want to contact nifty.org because there sight has been running since the early it’s with no problem.
on How I Spent My Summer Vacation, Part Two
Nov 12, 07:12
Nice. But need more mom daughter stories rather than just fantasies
on A Special Request, Part Two
Nov 12, 06:48
Naughty Mommy … 11 years later I got to read this and an 11 y/o (pretending to be) in the story. Maybe it’s kismet? OMG … Mommy … this story was fabulous, well written, the words flew by, so hot, and erotic. I had a friend (when living for a couple of years in England) that was so petite, pretty, and also did “favors.” She once told me about something like this, but her true happening and your story – while hers was hot, yours was hotter. I remember after she told me about it, we were soon in bed and into character she went. One wonders if your Emily ever took the next step. No matter though, in her mind and with Collette being Kathy, she lived it to utter satisfaction to the enjoyment for both of them. Emily’s fantasy – and that’s what this site is about. The enjoyment of fantasy even if not acted upon. The mind, the words, the feelings – give the pleasure. Collette made it real for her and an experience neither would soon forget. Loved this, thank you, Mommy!
Nov 12, 06:37
Wow, naughty mummy… I’m blown away. This chapter is so hot… everything is just unbelievably sexy. Where on earth do I start? 😀 First of all, the role-play between Julie, Suzanne and Melissa is so wickedly hot. It’s amazing how much Suzanne craves Molly sexually. It’s beautiful. And yes! What a milestone. Finally!! Suzanne slides her finger into Julie’s vagina and fucks her with it! And right in the middle of this orgy… sooo lovely! Then Kate’s idea is just so arousing! Blimey, Naughty Mummy, this is one of my favourite chapters. The hint at the end that Molly might be watching? Thrilling! Thanks, Naughty Mommy
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 12, 02:03
From Sunny Coast QLD.OZ. I do hope you all do well in this time of dilemma. I have read a lot of your stories of late, the humour and light drama/ romance is an interest I get enjoyment from as well as the main topic of sex and where the authors take their characters and stories. Best of luck or dealings with keeping this site up for every one involved, staff authors and readers. Thankyou so much: GNB.
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 12, 00:49
Bottom right of the home page.
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 23:01
Sorry to hear about this I hope you work this out.
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 22:36
Hi! How does one get on the email list?
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 20:08
Universe is really out to get y’all, huh? It’s unfortunate but hopefully it’ll be okay in the end, best of luck with everything that’s going on. In the meantime I’ll be archiving more of my favorites, just in case 🙂
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 18:53
Thank you. I was in despair at the recent disappearance, but a tech-savvy friend found the new site.
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 15:20
Thanks for letting everyone know, at least we have some advance warning this time. Good luck people!
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 14:54
Where can I contact you, in case?
Nov 11, 14:54
Waiting for news, guys, be careful
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 14:53
Holy shit, dude, you guys just can’t catch a break. And I might know a thing or two about getting canned basically just because. Always makes me think of this little clip, which sums it up pretty well. https://youtu.be/2EwGHjogRz0?t=2760
Nov 11, 14:40
Bottom right of the home page.
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 13:16
Sending you the best of luck to help you guys to move forward. Hopefully you will get the new host to post this amazing website. Waiting anxiously to hear the good news!
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 12:35
Hoping for success; good luck.
Nov 11, 12:32
Who says you can’t? I know it’s been a long time since you had anything published since A Mother’s Plea. I read your comments and sensed some of your despondency. But, I saw no reason why you shouldn’t have submitted something else. I didn’t think I could write at one time, and I was told what I did write wasn’t very good; I believed it. Then one person told me they were wrong and that I should persevere; but to make some significant improvements to my grammar and punctuation. My grammar is still not the best, but I do try hard to get it right. I still struggle with the semi-colon (;), but so did Stephen King; so do I allow myself to worry about it too much? Not at all! Obviously, not everyone can write. It takes some creative imagination; which we don’t all have The old saying of – try, try, and try again can be very true. Oh, by-the-way, thank you for your very kind comment.
Nov 11, 12:23
So so so sad to see this happening again. Sounds like some Comstocker got to the people who run Dreamhost. Why can’t this people just leave us lovely law-abiding citizens who enjoy this beauitful form of erotica alone and let us enjoy ourselves. Sadly I fear as this world is being turned on it’s proverbial head by the current crop of maniacal world leaders, this is going to keep happening. Good luck Jetboy, Amanda & Erototech in your search. Hopefully you find a place that is much more open minded and the Comstockers won’t be able to influence.
Nov 11, 09:55
Yes fingers crossed. You are wonderful doing what you do for us. Even id we don’t get the invite on the first, second, etc., list … we hope to get it at some point. We love this site!
Nov 11, 09:21
Where is the mailing list?
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 08:43
I hope you are getting a partial refund on that subscription. If they don’t reimburse you for the time you don’t have the service anymore that sounds questionable if not illegal. I’m not a lawyer maybe it will just be a dick move on their part and not illegal. Either way I hope you all recover and bounce back better then ever, good luck.
Nov 11, 07:02
Oh my God, that’s so outrageously hot. This chapter is absolutely brilliant, Naughty Mummy. I love it… especially Julie and Kate and their mum. And at the end, when Julie asks Melissa to pretend she’s her little sister… so naughty! Julie really is totally uninhibited when it comes to sex.
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 04:55
Good Luck Jetboy. I hope it all works out real soon. Maybe this will be the last tims JS will have to move for a very long time.
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 04:27
Thanks for all your efforts
on Nighttime Secrets, Part One
Nov 11, 04:01
Thank you No One, The character’s dialogue was the winner for me. The thought process in Willow’s mind was believable and cute! What lovely characters they are.
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 03:43
I was afraid you were gone for good, thank goodness that is not the case.Hopefully you have me on your list to receive the updates.
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 01:44
I second what Rabby has said
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 00:33
I think im on the email list but im not sure
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 11, 00:28
Fingers crossed!
on How I Spent My Summer Vacation, Part Two
Nov 10, 23:51
I really like the story it does seem rushed though
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 10, 23:04
Well your tenacity and collective energy to keep going is what keeps us returning and offering our hopes…keep up the good fight!
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 10, 23:03
hope all goes well with your seachfor a new home hope to be hearing you people
Nov 10, 22:51
Good Luck in all you do, guys!
on Juicy Secrets is Getting Shut Down… Hopefully, to Rise Again Like Lazarus
Nov 10, 22:19
Very best of luck Jetboy. Looking forward to hearing of your success in finding a new home.
Nov 10, 17:22
Oh, fuck… was delighted with the wonderful and erotic story, only to find it halted in 2016 and remains unfinished. It’s like having an orgasm jolted halfway through an event and then CUT… and that was 10 years ago. Let’s hope Mommy Janice is filled with inspiration soon and continues her delightful ‘naughty’ story to the satisfaction of all her readers… If not… then bless her and a big thank you for creating what has been created so far. And trust that you are well and healthy. xoxo
Nov 10, 14:01
Wow, what an exciting chapter. I particularly like Kate and Julie here. They seem very much in love. The orgy scene is particularly thrilling. Thanks, naughy mommy
Nov 10, 08:17
This chapter continues in a gripping way. It’s a bit of a let-down that it’s carrying on as “usual”. I thought that from now on, the wildest family orgies with Suzanne, Kate and Julie would be taking place every evening… a shame, but it makes sense – school is important. I was really surprised by Julie’s idea to go and visit her mum at work… how cool! The way she seduces her mum! Blimey, that’s hot. So well written. And the way Julie plays with her mum… so self-assured, so cheeky! The way she seduces her mum… so erotic, so depraved, so forbidden… this incest between them is absolutely lovely. It’s nice that the two of them have a chat about the consequences later on. Thank goodness – I’d already been fearing that on Saturday Julie would choose babysitting over another incestuous lesbian orgy with her mum… luckily, Suzanne says no! Thank you!!! It’s super exciting, but it’s a shame that Suzanne has forbidden Kate and Julie from watching porn on their own… why? But it’s so beautiful seeing all three of them naked in Mum’s bed… watching lesbian porn. So hot! Now we know for sure!! Molly is sexually active… with her mum, Suzanne! That’s so hot – Molly’s so young, how hot is that? But why? Why doesn’t Julie go to her mum? Why doesn’t she wake Kate up so the four of them can have a wild lesbian orgy? I know… I know… slowly, one milestone at a time… But brilliantly written, Naughty Mummy. Thanks a million 🙂
Nov 10, 07:05
This chapter gets off to a bloody hot start. After her intense orgasm, Julie realises that her hand is inside her mother’s vagina. What a milestone! As arousing and intense as this orgasm is for Suzanne. As hot as the two of them are kissing. They love each other with such forbidden passion. It’s interesting that afterwards they watch harder porn featuring anal penetration. Hopefully Julie will want to give that a go too. It’s unbelievable that Carla’s fucking Suzanne with a strap-on… in front of Suzanne’s daughters! That’s really hot. And the way Julie starts talking dirty again and cheers her mum on whilst she’s having sex with Carla… so hot. And here’s Suzanne back in full dominatrix mode… so wonderful. The way she involves Kate and Julie in the dirty talk. I don’t know what fascinates me more: Suzanne’s crude, intense language in front of her daughters… or precisely because she’s having this conversation with her daughters. I think it’s lovely that Suzanne apologises to Julie the next morning… Suzanne is a brilliant mum who worries far too much. If Julie didn’t like something, she’d say so. Suzanne knows that for a fact. It’s so sweet how the two of them talk lovingly and hug each other. Julie is so pure… so clever. Wow, how playfully Suzanne interacts with Kate… I like that. So sweet. It’s lovely that Julie plays with Molly and wants to find out if Molly is sexually active. It’s a shame, though, that Julie doesn’t probe any further and ends the conversation so quickly. But otherwise, a great chapter. I love the chemistry between Julie and Suzanne. Especially the hickey. Thanks, Naughty Mommy
Nov 10, 06:34
Wow, it’s still so exciting! It’s so sweet how Julie plucks up the courage to finally get closer to Kate, and right when her mum Suzanne is watching. And in front of a stranger too… who becomes a witness to this enchanting incest. Brilliant – I love Julie and her newfound willingness to finally dare to do more, to take things further! Go on, girl! It’s so lovely that Suzanne has an orgasm when Julie first kisses her sister’s vagina. Wow, Julie wants to be dominant too, just not as harsh as her mum Suzanne… the way Julie treats Kate is sooo tender, sooo loving and so bloody sexy! Julie’s good at dirty talk… probably learnt it from her mum. I’ve got to give you another round of praise here, naughty Mummy – you write so sensually… so lovingly and so well! Truly unbelievably well! Your stories actually deserve more attention. This love between Julie and Kate is sooo deeply passionate. So beautifully moving. I love Kate and Julie here. It’s arousing that Suzanne lets Kate use the vibrator. I love how Julie asks her mum to kiss her vagina! Sooo hot. Oh my God, the way Kate and Carla share the vibrator… So hot and sexy And then Julie and her mum… in the same position as when they make love, and Suzanne wants to give her daughter a hickey… oh God, so arousing! Oh, the way Julie and her mum talk to each other… so touching. So full of love! I love Julie and her mum in this scene! So touching that Suzanne and Julie come together. It’s just that special bond between Suzanne and Julie… that deep connection… I love it
Nov 10, 02:54
This chapter really got to me. I could not finish in one setting, having to take a few moments for a bit of – well, you know. It was beautifully written. The word visuals. I could feel the heat and sense the sex in the air (maybe that was mine though). The words allowed us to be right there with them – moving from the girls to the moms to the girls, etc. It was so hot!
Nov 10, 02:10
OMG – on both counts, Lia and Jess – Nora and Karen. I’m not sure who of the five is more wet right now? IYKYK.
Nov 9, 23:55
I know I’m late to this story, so please forgive me. Now that I’ve made it through Chapter 10, then I must let out a great big, “wow!” I’d bet many of us can relate to the feelings of love and lust that Lia and Jess are experiencing. And the words of the other commenters are spot on. This story is nicely done, steamy hot, and alluring from all aspects.
on My Sister’s Trap
Nov 9, 14:40
I, too, missed this story. It’s a treat whenever a story like this pops up. I wish I could write like this.
Nov 9, 14:23
So many good stories here, I like to give a shout out once in awhile for a great story that newer readers may have missed. This is a great one.
on Two Moms, Chapter 1
Nov 9, 12:44
Someone seems to have posted this fun story at Nifty. Might want to ask them to remove it.
Nov 9, 12:12
The excitement continues! I love Kate’s cheeky manner… it’s a shame she was stopped by her mother, Suzanne. It’s just as much a shame that Julie didn’t dare to go any further either. Her usual sexual curiosity and assertiveness have vanished here. It’s incredibly arousing to see the mother and her daughters looking at a stranger sexually… so close… so intimate… so forbidden and hot! Oh my God! When Suzanne takes the knickers and slips them into Carla’s vagina… wow, goosebumps – so incredibly hot! And when Suzanne speaks to Carla in such a humiliating way… in front of her daughters… bloody hell, Naughty Mommy, you write so well! Suzanne is a dominatrix and she loves it… madness! And the way Carla submits to Suzanne, calls her ‘Mistress’ and serves Julie… oh God, so hot! I think that’s the hottest scene in this chapter. Julie in this trance is a brilliant touch, which seems to hint at something else. Julie’s wish is a special one – to be touched and massaged by everyone… so sexually arousing. It’s lovely that they all fulfil this wish for her. And then the way Kate and Suzanne are together… and my goodness, it just keeps going! A brilliant chapter!
Nov 9, 09:37
Wow, another incredibly thrilling and passionate chapter! I love Suzanne, Kate and Julie here… Suzanne is so full of love for Kate and Julie… I don’t even know which character I’d most like to be… probably Clara – then I could savour that incredible, deep love a mother has for her daughters! It gave me goosebumps just reading it, and there’s more to come! Wow, thank you so much for this, Naughty Mommy! Brilliantly written
on My Sister’s Trap
Nov 9, 06:29
My word ladies – how could I have always missed this wonderful erotic story? I caught it by surprise after seeing Kinkys_sis had made a comment and thrilled you did. And in looking at the comments, it seems a few us might have slid into a little trap like this. Ladies, all I can say is thank you for sharing this delightful story.
Nov 8, 21:47
Even though one participant is a bit young for my taste, I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Loads and loads of good hot sex.
Nov 8, 21:26
Thank you. So nice to get a plug. I just read it again for the first time in a long time. It still hits the right spot.
Nov 8, 20:06
Thank you both for the comments. Erocritique is correct in that it’s really a ‘fuck’ story and without any real plot other than lots of sex. craw2519 is also correct that it doesn’t have any real plot and expected a little more from me and I hope I didn’t let too many readers down in that regard. Full disclosure: JetBoy has an editor in training (Cariad) and I gave JetBoy a story I’d done, that he thought was okay because of the little twist in it, but was just okay story wise. So, they worked up a very hot ‘wank’ story with what they had to work with. I think they did a good job, and I’ll share any praise with them and take any blame for the story on myself. It was only going to be two parts, but JB had sort of ended part two with what I thought was really a good outline for a third part of the story. I wrote it out and they’re working on it as we read. I didn’t intend to be so long winded but it’s a peek behind the scenes. I hope part three won’t bore anyone, and I hope it’s lack of real development story and character wise won’t put anyone off. I just like doing a ‘wank’ story sometimes, and am happy if readers can enjoy it that way.
Nov 8, 16:02
But according to the Bible she was a virgin and became pregnant through Immaculate Conception so… Virgin Pregnancy and Virgin Birth. Just saying… no sex involved?!!
Nov 8, 15:58
Naughty Mommy. You are my favourite ‘debauched and depraved’ lady. By that I really mean that you are strong enough to stand outside the box of current repressed and fucked up European society’s norms… and hypocrisy. Good on you. I am not advocating a pedo lifestyle, the better interests of vulnerable people of all ages are paramount. I’m sure we could enjoy many hours of discussions on this and related topics. Meanwhile, Naughty Mommy let me say how much I have enjoyed your stories and comments of your experiences. Bless you !! xxx
on Readers Forum
Nov 8, 14:23
It is hard to wait for new chapters. I happen to be waiting for a new chapter of that Lucy story too. I remember waiting for the chapters of Down the Rabbit Hole here on JuicySecrets. Waiting is so hard! I haven’t found a new obsession here since they finished Down the Rabbit Hole. I hope to come across another story that hooks me soon. Good luck on the waiting game. I wish I knew a secret to waiting well.
Nov 8, 11:34
If I gave the impression that I didn’t enjoy the chapter, it was unintentional. I was just expecting a little bit more and as Purple Les said, it just didn’t do it for me. I have read other sories by Purple Les and have thought that they were good and enjoyed reading them.
on How I Spent My Summer Vacation, Part Two
Nov 7, 21:29
I’m pretty sure this chapter was meant to provide some serious & extended “wank” material to appease some readers’ desire for that kind of fare. This certainly isn’t one of the more plot driven stories with significant foundation building for every scene, but it did achieve its goal, imho. I also see this story as a change of pace from some of the more intense(?) stories on the site. The story is different in its own way, which provides variety to the site. I would suggest just trying to enjoy it for what it is. Just my two cents.
Nov 7, 15:07
PervyBoy ; Thanks on behalf of myself and JetBoy and Cariad. Great to hear you enjoyed it. craw2519 ; No need to be sorry. A compliment with ‘nicely written’, but it didn’t do it for you. I understand. Good for me to know so I can try harder next time. Thanks for reading it and leaving a comment.
Nov 7, 14:55
To add my 2 cents, I found the new url on a different site, same one I found your stories on.
Nov 7, 12:50
Sorry Purple Les, it was a nicely written chapter, but it bored me to tears. I found no real excitement or any real build up to any kind of intimacy. It just seem to be matter of fact reading.
on How I Spent My Summer Vacation, Part Two
Nov 6, 21:49
An absolute masterpiece, I had to read it in multiple parts because it was too much to handle. My one complaint is that I wish we got all the steamy details on every encounter, each one was already so amazing. I need part 3 asap, looking forward to it!
Nov 6, 15:06
Just a mention to anyone who has not read this, a classic that should be checked out, by my fav co-writing team.
Nov 6, 14:08
Agree very strongly with most comments on this wonderful first chapter. Good stuff and eager for the next chapter.
Nov 6, 14:05
Emiliano ; thank you friend, always good to hear from you. Erocritique ; thank you from the three of us. I’m looking for that typo, maybe JB got it already, ‘neah’ could be the local dialect ; ) Anyway thanks for the very positive comments, it’s always a thrill to get some kind words on a story.
Nov 6, 12:01
Oh dear, at first I’m a bit disappointed… Julie prefers babysitting to a porn session with Mum and her sister? That surprised me – I thought Julie would immediately strip off in response and be the first to jump into Mum’s room. I’m also a bit worried that this babysitting job will take up a lot of time. I mean, if Julie already prefers babysitting to this porn night… that’s a bit of a blow. Julie comes from a wealthy family, so she’s not at all in need of the money. And she doesn’t even enjoy this sort of babysitting… so I find it hard to understand this decision. That conversation with Madisson – my goodness, it was embarrassing and it hurt… I felt for Julie… hopefully she’ll realise that her mum and sister Kate are more than enough to love her. Oh my! Her childlike naivety regarding Madisson’s expectations is absolutely adorable. You’ve portrayed Julie brilliantly here… I just want to give her a hug and comfort her. Ohh, Suzanne… maybe I’d forgotten her name… but never mind, now I know it. I really like that Suzanne is planning a surprise for Julie and Kate… hopefully something exciting! It’s lovely and fair that Suzanne is thinking of Molly too and wants to do something just with her. The idea of Suzanne and Molly going for a ride is so wonderful… lovely idea, Naughty Mommy. But I’m a bit surprised – showing up at the shopping centre looking so flashy and provocative? Is the shopping centre in the same town where Julie lives? Isn’t it a bit risky to bump into people who know them all? I find it a bit odd because Suzanne insists so much on her rules and wants as few people as possible to know about it. If it’s a shopping centre further away, that’s brilliant! I think the message is important and right: women should be able to wear whatever they want without having to feel ashamed!! I couldn’t agree more. Otherwise, a very exciting chapter. Well written. It looks like things are set to continue with a hot night with Carla. I’m really looking forward to it. Thanks, Naughty Mommy 😀
Nov 6, 10:58
Yessss, oh my God!! Julie and her mum almost have sex and then….Nooooo! Mum, why? Why don’t you feel ready?!? It would have been so perfect right now… Julie’s rightly confused… God, when Julie’s mum looks into her eyes and says…. I want you so much… oh God, that sent a shiver down my spine… So passionately in love… only a mother and daughter can understand this love… written so incredibly hot! Oh, I love Julie’s mum here and I’m a bit angry… everyone wants Julie – even Kate – and they’re all holding back! I feel so sorry for Julie… But the fact that Julie asked her mum if she could watch porn with her mum (!)… I think that’s bold and hot of Julie! Oh my God, I think this is one of my favourite chapters! When Julie’s mum comes out of Molly’s room, blushing and breathing heavily… it’s just so obvious! It’s a shame Julie doesn’t ask her mum about it. But oh my God, when Julie’s mum suggests watching a film – a porn film – together with Kate(!)… oh fuck, that was hot! Written so arousing!! I think watching porn with young daughters is mega arousing! How cool that Julie’s mum goes along with it… So depraved and so arousing! How I’d love to be Kate right now… or maybe her mum? Oh, it’s so hard to decide! It’s sooo hot! This masturbation porn session is unbelievably arousing! I really like how Julie’s mum keeps talking to Kate and Julie. That’s definitely one of my favourite chapters.
Nov 6, 07:19
Oh my goodness, yes! That’s exactly why I love Julie and her mum! They’re so loving towards each other. Julie’s mum reacts brilliantly and lovingly here. She explains things and lets Julie realise for herself what was wrong… that’s brilliant! I particularly like it when the two of them speak honestly. It’s so sweet to read! Julie and her mum are absolutely lovely, and I hope… that her mum is finally ready to let go of all her reservations and fuck Julie all over the house and marry her… Brilliantly written, Naught Mommy 😀 Thanks
Nov 6, 06:32
Wow, what a lovely, exciting chapter. At the start, I had to laugh because Julie was thinking about the washing machine… I’d completely forgotten about it, and it’s actually irrelevant to the story… but this attention to detail on your part as the author, Naughty Mommy, is remarkable. The conversation and the passionate, sensual kissing between Kate and Julie are really steamy… but it’s such a shame that Kate stopped. It confuses me a bit… her argument is that if Julie weren’t her sister, she’d go further. But they’re kissing passionately, masturbating and have even talked about incest… Actually, the taboo boundary has long since been crossed… the two of them have been given this incredible opportunity to even experience this… they get on so well and Julie loves Kate… truly extraordinarily, and Kate surely feels the same. Their mum’s reaction to Kate and Julie is very sweet… It’s lovely that the three of them cuddle up in bed and Julie tells her mum everything… but it’s a shame nothing more happens after that… obviously they kiss, lick and masturbate… And anal! The first time an anal act takes place between Julie and her mum… hopefully there’ll be more anal sex later on… Julie certainly enjoyed it Then, at the end, Molly is hinted at… again. I think it’s lovely that Julie asks her mum if she should go and fetch Molly… but she should also ask whether Julie’s mum does sexual things with Molly… actually But otherwise, it’s lovely and well written. I love Julie, Kate and her mum! Such lovable characters 🙂 Thanks, Naughty Mummy
on The House On Blackthorn Lane, Chapter 1
Nov 5, 20:11
Definitely has pulled me in. Has a vividness and reality that I can see and hear. I can’t wait for more.
Nov 5, 19:44
Whoa!!! That escalated quickly!!! Perfect fare for the site and its readers!!! So much “juicy” goodness (or naughtiness) that must remain”secrets”!!! I loved it. It was unapologetically taboo, kinky, and highly erotic. Well played,!!! Kudos to “the collaborators”!!! There was a weird little typo (“neah”) in the scene where the narrator and Rose first got each other off, but it was pretty minor. It could have been “near” or “next to”. Overall, quite a “stimulating” chapter. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Nov 5, 17:27
Nina,Vanessa,sue; Thank you all very much for the kind words from the three of us writers. We are grateful we could make an enjoyable story for you.
Nov 5, 16:37
Nah! This was put up after your initial post. 🙂
on Rumors of Our Demise Have Proven Less Than Accurate
Nov 5, 16:18
My fucking god i am legally blind i did not read the front page i am a doofus Welp, happy that y’all are back.
Nov 5, 14:44
AO3 Down, time to comeback and finish the stories I started Also what happened? I lost this site for 3 weeks…
Nov 5, 13:53
Another chock full of sex chapter. Loved reading about Rose and Dani and their cousin. The little twist at the end left me drooling and gooey for part three. Had to read the story in three sessions, enjoying each part to the max.
Nov 5, 13:47
The story is good. It could be mainstream without the underage sex element, yet that’s a big part of the story just the same. I feel the sex is an important part as it’s the underlying factor to a lot of the motivation and relationships. I’m not sure it would be the same story without it, yet I think it could still maybe stand on it’s own. I think of the sex parts in this story as the icing on an already very delicious cake. Hope that makes sense.
Nov 5, 13:47
I absolutely love Kate and Julie! It’s wonderful to watch these two sisters sharing passionate kisses and orgasms. It’s just a shame… that nothing more happens. It would be brilliant if the two of them copied what they’d seen their mum doing when she was shagging other women… they’ve seen lesbian sex and know how it’s done… so why not give it a go? Julie’s sexually curious and Kate’s open-minded… the two of them could fuck each other all over the bed… But I know… one milestone at a time. You’ve written it very arousing and well. The idea at the end is naughty and typical of Julie – precisely that tendency towards curiosity and a bit of sexual daring. It’s lovely that Kate trusts Julie enough to go along with it! This is going to be exciting; I absolutely must read the next chapter. Thanks, Naughty Momm
Nov 5, 13:08
I found this lovely story after seeing snowrider had commented on it in the recent comments list and super glad I found it. Such a lovely mother-daughter story (my favourite kind) with how mum found herself through her goth girlfriend leading to her beautiful seduction of her daughter and their lovely lovemaking. Just one very small hiccup, what age is barbara, 35 or 36, not that it is very important.
Nov 5, 12:12
Oh wow, what a lovely chapter! I was surprised at first, but now I’m even more fascinated by Julie’s mum. She was a child prodigy! It’s brilliant – you can really see how clever she is in everyday life. The fact that she’s remained a mum despite her intelligence shows her deep love and her willingness to make sacrifices. So lovely! The conversation with Julie afterwards is absolutely heart-warming! A once-in-a-lifetime opportunity – a private school in England… and Julie doesn’t want to go; she wants to stay – how sweet! And her mum wants to make it possible for her, even though it breaks her heart… That’s the special bond between Julie and her mum. This is definitely one of my favourite chapters. Not much happens… but the conversation between Julie and her mum is simply heart-warming! Thanks, naughty mummy
on How I Spent My Summer Vacation, Part Two
Nov 5, 10:55
What an absolute amazing story. Very well written and the excitement keeps building with every paragraph. One of the great joys of being a mother – thank you
Nov 5, 09:01
Oh my God, things are really heating up. When Julie and Kate sit on Danni’s legs to ride her… that’s the absolute highlight! Oh God, it’s so incredibly arousing and sexy. Julie and Kate are fucking Danni together… I’d love to be Danni right now! And then her mum turns up… it’s actually surprising how she reacts… because, well, it was happening without her… and Julie’s mum is usually strict about her rules… but not at all here. She could be jealous… but she isn’t. That’s true love! It’s so wickedly hot the way the mum straddles Danni and demands she slide her fingers into her pussy… Kate and Julie are right there beside them! Sooo depravedly hot!! It’s written in such a wickedly hot way! Thanks, Naughty Mommy! I love the hint at the end. Now I want to read on!
Nov 5, 08:23
This chapter is unbelievably hot again. But I have to point something out. It’s hinted at once more that Molly is sexually active… this time quite obviously! Julie even questions it herself… here’s a question: why doesn’t Molly talk to her sisters about it? Or why doesn’t Julie ask her sister? Molly isn’t stupid… she’s articulate and comes across as nice. Julie and Molly have often played together, so… they get on well as sisters and there’s clearly affection between them… so why don’t the two of them talk to each other… after all, Julie has talked to Kate about sexual matters. Otherwise, it’s really hot how Kate and Julie seduce Danni together whilst her mum’s away!?! So hot – I love Julie and her growing self-confidence. So hot I have to agree with Danni – it’s a totally brilliant family! Oh my God, Naughty Mommy, the way you let Kate and Julie kiss and almost have sex right in front of Danni!!! So hot! A threesome orgasm – what a wicked idea! It’s so lovely seeing the three of them arriving at Silv’s in ‘Sternacht’ at 12:00… so romantic! Thanks, Naughty Mommy
Nov 5, 07:18
Wow… what an amazing chapter. I think it’s definitely one of my favourites! First of all, I feel sorry for Julie’s mum… at the start we find out that Julie’s mum lost her mum when she was a teenager… (if that’s something from your own life… I’m really sorry to hear that) Otherwise, I’m absolutely delighted that Julie’s mum has found a partner… She must be really great! I’m proud of her. And then that night… Julie’s staying over at Kate’s… and then her mum comes into her room and kisses Julie and Kate… because she’d been going without love for days and nights on end and missed Julie and Kate!!! Oh my God, Naughty Mummy… that forbidden, longing love… it’s sooo incredibly arousing! That’s exactly the sort of thing you’re sooo good at writing! At last! The three of them are in bed together! How lovely that the mum was able to bring herself to do it. What a milestone! The three of them lose themselves in a threesome kiss – how arousing… my heart’s pounding like mad at the forbidden thought! So hot!! And afterwards… Kate and Julie are so sweet!
Nov 5, 06:57
Oh my God! Naughty Mommy, what an unbelievably hot chapter! So arousing and sexy! The way Kate and Julie put on a show together! So incredibly forbidden and passionate! I really like Julie’s and Kate’s mum here… You’ve written it well; personally, I find it a bit of a shame that EA just stuck to watching. Towards the end, Julie’s mum could have waved them down and they could have kissed or something… but one milestone at a time… it’s Kate’s first time, so she’s got a lot to take in 😀 Thanks, Naughty Mommy, for this steamy chapter
on How I Spent My Summer Vacation, Part Two
Nov 5, 06:40
Les – you continue to rouse the excitement in me as I am completely sopping wet! This was one hot and erotic chapter, all the girls, plus now the moms. While I cannot say if any of this kindles long ago, warm memories – I will say that, in the present, I’m definitely going to have my device read the words aloud just as Ms. Rubinoff plans to have Ivy do. There’s “just something” about hearing the words as one’s body is also enjoying even if done either by oneself or a female friend. Thank you for a wonderfully written chapter!
Nov 4, 21:32
Thank you so much! I believe the next chapter will be up sometime next week.
Nov 4, 13:59
An absolutely tasty story, I can’t wait for the next part.
Nov 4, 13:33
Wow, Julie and Kate are incredibly erotic and so hot here! The way they kiss so tenderly, lovingly and passionately… Naughty Mummy, you’ve written this beautifully… with so much love for these characters. I love that they’re sisters and so in love… it’s lovely! D
on The Evil That Men Do, Chapter 27
Nov 4, 12:22
Sue, saying that the main story elements were more interesting on the first read than the sex scene is in fact the best compliment you could give me. I honestly get a little sad when people make comments that are only about the sex. So thank you!
Nov 4, 12:10
An amazing story, simultaneously cute and erotic. The characters are well written and their encounter is incredibly hot. I enjoyed the story in all the right ways and I’m looking forward to more.
on Ultimate Surrender, Chapter 1
Nov 4, 00:00
Hopefully, Girl Lover will have a sequel, say five years in the future. Imagine the two young girls exploring each other; each having a session with Raven and Kala together, and perhaps bringing in a classmate. The possibilities are never ending.
Nov 3, 20:49
This is one of my all time favorite stories. So much good writing and feeling. One that I liked early on in the story. A long, comfortable silence passed as they looked into each other’s sparkling eyes. “Cannn I kiss you?” Julie said. It sounded less like a question and more like Heeere we go. “Yeh,” Emily said with a puff of breath, just a ghost of a whisper if it was even a word. Emily turned her face up, her eyes jammed shut and her lips open expectantly. Julie smiled wide, then closed her own eyes and bent down. Their lips met.
Nov 3, 14:18
With all the other things going on I’d sort of given the sex part not the full attention it deserved. Very unlike me. The sex scene is excellent!
Nov 3, 14:01
Interesting – now Molly’s become the object of Julie’s desire too! Hot. I do think it’s a shame, though, that Kate and her mum are alone in the room… why doesn’t Julie go over to them to have some fun? It’s sweet how Kate always goes to Julie afterwards to tell her everything, but it feels a bit odd… Julie and her mum have such a strong bond! Their love for each other is existential! They’re dependent on each other. When Kate’s mum always goes to see Kate on her own without Julie… I get it the first time… That was meant to be something special for Kate… but every single time? I hope that changes later on. Otherwise, another good chapter. Thanks, Naughty Mommy
Nov 3, 13:16
Abaolutly hot! thanks for this amazing chapter. I love Julies Mother here!
Nov 3, 13:08
Oh wow, that’s definitely one of my favourite chapters! I think it’s incredibly romantic, and Julie and her mum are just so hot and arousing in this chapter. I really like the bit where Julie lets her mum show her how to insert a finger into her vagina! Sooo hot and sexy! And at the end… wow, Naughty Mommy, the way you’ve written about Julie and her mum here… absolutely lovely! That deep love… which is so much more than we can imagine. That declaration of love from Julie’s mum is absolutely the highlight of the chapter… perhaps even of the whole work? But ultimately, both of them know about their deep love for one another… though I’m not sure about that either. Is there another mutual declaration of love to come, accompanied by uninhibited, wild sex…? Because if so, that’s bound to be even better than this. But even this is a special milestone, and I’m enjoying it to the full. Thank you! Something else I’ve noticed is that Julie’s mum is incredibly cautious. She asks Julie and Kate almost three times whether they really want to do it… she does this all the time. As Julie’s mum is a solicitor, perhaps that’s why? Does she want to cover herself because she knows it’s ‘illegal’? Or am I wrong about that? Thanks, naughty mummy
Nov 3, 09:48
I think Julie’s and Kate’s mum is brilliant in this chapter! She’s just as loving towards Kate as she is towards Julie, and yet… you can really feel that special tension between Julie and her mum, without Kate feeling left out… ‘Naughty Mommy’ is brilliantly written. I hope things really get going without holding back in the next few chapters! Thanks 😀
Nov 3, 07:05
Wow, Naughty Mummy At first I was a bit disappointed – I thought Juliebird would be there for the first time when Kate and her mum got intimate and sexual. But then I realised that Julie’s mum wanted that moment to belong only to Kate… just her and Kate. I get that, and it’s exciting too. It’s really sweet that Kate goes to bed with Julie afterwards to tell her everything. It was incredibly hot that Julie asked Kate to smear her juices all over her face… oh my God, what a naughty idea!! So sexy! It’s really sweet that Julie invites Kate to sleep over. Kate and Julie are generally always great together… You really want the best for them – this love and the passionate sexual games they get up to… I’m actually hoping it gets really out of hand and ends in wild, uninhibited sex in every possible variation… just like with Julie and her mum. I can’t wait to find out!
Nov 2, 21:40
Okay, it’s been awhile, and I must have been good because we have now The House On Blackthorn Lane. This series is very good, and this chapter is a favorite.
on Paula
Nov 2, 18:42
Thanks to Danny for linking to this story on the home page for Halloween, to all who may have read it again, and to Purple Les, kinkys_sis, and kim and sue for commenting. It’s been somewhat revised, esp. toward the end, and I was hoping everyone would see it in its (to date) final form.
Nov 2, 14:00
Hi, Craw, and thanks! As for what’s next: by coincidence, I’m just this minute reviewing the next chapter for errors, and doing the write-up for the theme lyrics I’ve chosen.
Nov 2, 13:21
Rachel, whats to say, nothing and yet everything, because it was another great chapter. and we wait for what’s next.
Nov 2, 13:18
“Hey now, wait a minute,” chastised our mother, “you’re not supposed to do that.” However, as she said these words she was also kneeling behind me, pulling my dress up above my waist and tugging down my pantyhose and my lacy black undies. Mommy buried her face in my snatch, licking my slit. Dana came very quickly, soaking my hand, panting and groaning in ecstasy. I wasn’t really that close yet. My mom’s tongue felt great, but it would take a little while for me to build up and reach that point. Except then Mommy stood up, reaching around the front with her other hand to massage my clit while pushing a finger into my vagina from behind. “You wanna come, little girl?” she taunted seductively, thrillingly. “Huh? Want Mommy to fuck you and make you come?” And that’s what did it. With my fingers still wet and sticky from Dana’s climax, and my mom rubbing me and fucking me and talking like that, I came much faster than I usually would — crying out as a powerful orgasm suddenly surged up from within, flooding my whole body with electric warmth. Normally we might have gone on from there to a full-scale orgy — but we couldn’t that night because we had a party to attend. So, after I finished coming, and my mom licked her fingers clean and kissed me and told me how much she loved me, and after I licked my own tasty fingers and Dana and Mommy and I fixed up our faces again, we all went and got our coats and headed out for a fun New Year’s Eve. Chapter 134 is coming soon someday, maybe…
Nov 2, 13:14
Just to say that Jay W comment about the socks we agree. It’s a small moment but very human. that’s just something a nine year old would think.
Nov 2, 12:53
Ooh wow, this is another steamy chapter! It’s really arousing and so sexy watching Kate and Julie masturbating on the sofa… it’s a shame it doesn’t happen more often! But now things are getting exciting! Julie’s mum finally wants to talk to Kate… but why does Julie have to go to her room? Does Julie’s mum want to talk to Kate on her own? I’d understand that… but please let Julie be there if things get passionate and sexy between Kate and her mum… let Julie watch and join in… I can’t wait for the next chapter
Nov 2, 12:24
Oh my God! Naughty Mommy… this chapter is completely unexpected! The way Julie finds new courage and acts with authority… oh my goodness, that’s hot! Julie plays with her mum just as her mum used to do. That could be mean, but it isn’t. Julie means it lovingly and plays with her mum out of erotic passion. And my goodness, it works! Julie and her mum are having sex in the scissors position, if I’ve got that right? Even if not, it’s still incredibly hot either way! Julie’s mum is absolutely wild with lust for her daughter… blazing, pure passion! I absolutely love it! I love how Julie has her mum completely under her thumb here… I think Julie’s turned into a bit of a manipulator – in a good way, of course! Her love for her mum is so genuine!! That bit about the vision is really interesting… oh, I hope it actually comes true… that would be so hot! That little role-play where Julie pretends to be Kate… it’s so depraved and wicked! It’s actually unbelievable that Julie’s mum goes along with something like that… She really is the hottest mum ever! With every chapter, I fall more in love with her and her forbidden, deep love for her daughters. And as if the role-play with Kate wasn’t enough… then there’s the role-play with Molly! Oh my goodness! Then Julie’s mum’s bewildered face… madness!
Nov 2, 11:33
Oh my goodness, you really know how to build suspense! Julie’s mum is sooo sweet and utterly endearing in this chapter! So loving! I have to admit, I’d absolutely love to be part of this family… either as Julie’s mum’s daughter or as her wife… you’ve written Julie’s mum brilliantly… I love her. You can really tell she’s head over heels in love… she’s so full of energy and youthful enthusiasm… I love that! This chapter is unbelievably steamy! Now Kate’s finally getting involved too. I don’t know if it’ll happen in the next chapter. But I hope that when Kate and her mum have their first time – whatever might happen there… – she’ll be there! Naughty Mummy! D
Nov 2, 09:33
Oh wow! How intense! I really like the fact that Julie and her mum are finally expressing their deepest feelings. I like that Julie’s mum is setting her boundaries honestly. I like the fact that Julie is ready for anything… but her mum isn’t quite there yet… it really is a special situation and it’s lovely that they both respect that. What I did find a shame, though, was that Julie’s mum explained she needed time to feel ready… OK, fair enough. But then she said she didn’t know if she’d ever be ready… maybe nothing will ever come of it. I find that statement a shame… for Julie, who is literally craving her mother’s love, this prospect must be painful… it hurt me a little too. It seems to me that Julie is often more sensitive than her mother… perhaps that will change yet. The love Julie’s mother has for her is genuine and undeniable… but it’s a shame she can’t reassure her daughter and say, ‘I need time, but one day I’ll be ready for you.’ But apart from that, it’s incredibly hot how the two of them do the 69 position… incredibly hot. What struck me is that you never mention anal sex… I understand that you find anal penetration inappropriate… but the cunnilingus alone would surely be very sensual and erotic too? I think it’s wonderful that Julie’s mum finally plucks up the courage to kiss Julie’s vagina… what a hot, passionate moment and a milestone for the two of them! It’s incredibly erotic how they kiss and make love to each other! It’s just written in such a hot and arousing way. Thank you!
Nov 2, 08:42
Ohh, how lovely! I do think it’s a bit of a shame that the two of them – Julie and her mum – aren’t having a really passionate shag, but that’ll have to wait – one milestone at a time. What I do find lovely, though – and this surprised me – is that Julie is finally talking to her mum about Kate! Yesss, and it’s great that her mum wants to let Kate join in the game and talk to her!!! Ooh, will it lead to sex, or at least some wild kissing? Julie and her mum… I’m torn… I mean, Julie is finally revealing her true, deep, passionate love for her mum… Why is her mum laughing… that surprised me… Julie seems rightly hurt. It’s lovely that Julie’s mum apologises and takes her feelings seriously. But I thought… the two of them would have a heart-to-heart, confess their deep love, make love uninhibitedly and then get married ;D But it goes even further – I’m really excited to see how hot things will get in Julie’s mum’s bed!! But thanks, Naughty Mommy, for this brilliant
Nov 2, 08:15
Wow… so incredibly beautiful! It’s so incredibly hot and passionate the way the two sisters masturbate together and taste each other. Their love is sooo deep and beautiful! Kate and Julie are made for each other… just like Julie and her mum. I think I understand your literary approach of taking things slowly here… It’s so sensual the way the two of them masturbate together and lick each other. This is a long-awaited milestone… and they should savour it… if they’d already had sex by now, there would have been too many milestones… and this truly hard-earned, intense moment would have been lost. This is where I understand your approach… that’s exactly what makes your writing so special and extraordinary. You, ‘Naughty Mommy’, are brilliant at portraying the tender, beautiful, deeply loving mother-daughter dynamic – and in a way that’s both extremely sensual and uplifting… thank you for this masterpiece!
Nov 2, 07:57
It’s lovely how well Julie and Kate get on. And that their mum spends a bit more time with them both. I thought it was a shame that Julie was with her mum and Kate at the restaurant. Why didn’t Julie take the opportunity to talk to her mum about not wanting to lie to Kate any more? Julie is actually a link between her mum and Kate… so why aren’t they discussing it? Kate is definitely interested in the game Julie and her mum are playing. Kate has even confessed to Julie that she has sexual feelings for her mum. Julie and her mum are sexually open-minded and have already broken many taboos… a conversation like this should definitely be the logical next step. If you want to play with those temptations again, of course I understand. Unfortunately, I’m one of those impatient readers… but that doesn’t make the chapter any less good. Brilliantly written here too! I hope that in the later chapters all these secrets will be revealed and all four of them – mother and her daughters – will love each other with a forbidden passion! Oh my goodness, Naughty Mommy… I’m really keen to find that out. Thank you so much
Nov 2, 07:13
Wow, this is definitely one of my favourite chapters! Although mum and daughter haven’t yet admitted their deep love for one another… but it’s unbelievably steamy! They’re finally having sex! And it’s written so beautifully and lovingly! I love Julie and her mum! I love the love they have for each other! So exciting! At first, I was happy that Julie’s mum got rid of that pushy Katrina… hopefully that means Julie’s mum will find more time for her daughters. What I also think is great is that is that Julie’s mum believed her straight away when Katrina lied and claimed that Julie had asked her to sleep with her. Because Julie’s mum knows her sexually open-minded daughter… it could well have been the case. I think it’s lovely how unquestioningly she believes Julie… because Julie’s mum was in love with Katrina… it must have been hard for her. Brilliantly written, Naughty Mommy!!! That’s the incredibly hot mother-daughter love we’ve come to expect from you 😀
Nov 2, 06:52
Wow, Julie and Kate are so cute together! It’s really great how openly the two of them can talk to each other. The fact that they’re both madly in love with their mum is unbelievably hot… I’m really hoping that Kate gets involved in the relationship between Julie and her mum too… that would be so unbelievably hot! This chapter is all about the characters… good development and deepening of the characters. Well written. I agree with the other comments! You’re brilliant, Naughty Mommy, and I love your work and stories!
Nov 2, 06:26
Wow, Naught Mommy… that’s a great chapter! I understand you and the commenters. I totally get that you want to play with the tension… you want to drag it out and take it slowly… I totally understand… there are a few readers – myself included – who are a bit more impatient… though I imagine it’s probably difficult for you too, and it takes a lot of discipline to write in such a tantalising and beautiful way… I think it’s absolutely lovely how Julie and her mum love each other… beautifully written. I do find it a bit of a shame that… They both have so many desires! Julie wants physical contact so much… why doesn’t she confide in her mum? They love each other and talk openly about everything… why doesn’t Julie admit her deepest longings? It would be lovely if they could communicate a bit more openly about this. Julie is so self-assured and full of self-confidence… she and her mum love each other with all their hearts… surely she could confide in her?
Nov 1, 03:41
@Emiliano: Thanks! @Purple Les: Thank you so much, Purple, both for the compliment and the plug. ALways great to hear from you! @Erocritique: AH, the adjectives you bring to the table. Terrifying. Ominous. Menacing. All the things I love about Tarja Turunen! More recent Nightwish vocalist Floor Jansen gets lots of accolades for being more versatile and emotive, and while those things are largely true, she doesn’t bring the opera like Tarja does. This is metal; given a choice between a versatile, emotive singer and a Viking Warrior Goddess, I’ll take the latter. But yeah… that’s the real reason she got canned. In the early days Nightwish reveled in her raw power, writing classically-tinged melodies to make the most of what she brought to the table. This approach saw it’s culmination on the band’s sophomore effort, Oceanborn. By the fourth album (Century Child), Tuomos Holopainien was giving her simpler tunes that fell mostly into the lower half of her range, and there’s a direct quote from guitarist Emmpu Vuorinen that this was done to increase the band’s accessibility. But even when singing low, Turunen is incapable of sounding like anything other than an opera singer, and couple of years down the road they simply fired her.
Oct 31, 22:10
Checked out Tarja. She is somewhat terrifying. “Enfant Terrible”? That steel Valkyrie operatic voice with the metal backing music is a bit much for my sensibilities & sensitivities. And her look matches. I was almost overwhelmed. The subject matter of the lyrics was pretty heavy as well. Evanescence and Amy Lee is a bit more approachable? Tarja is obviously talented beyond belief, but maybe a bit much? I also feel her accent makes the overall sound of her music more ominous or menacing, which it doesn’t really need. But if you’re looking for that sound, then she is definitely your girl. jmtcw.
Oct 31, 21:54
Wow! It’s been a while since I really enjoyed a new story here. Bravo. Perhaps not the best of comments, but it says it all.
on Nighttime Secrets, Part One
Oct 31, 16:10
Not the only line that stayed with me, trust me on that one! But I highlight it because it’s an example of the kind of writing that elevates yours above most erotica in this genre.
Oct 31, 15:42
Another enjoyable chapter. Agree with others on all three parts of chapter, the last part was very rewarding. And to anyone who thinks it’s too far along to get into this story now, well, it’s a good story to binge to and catch up.
on The Joy of Looking, Chapter 19
Oct 31, 03:56
Love your enthusiasm, my man… but honestly, you don’t need to leave a comment for every single chapter. That kind of thing wipes other readers’ comments off the home page before they have time to get read. And this is a story of considerable length, so we’re talking a LOT of comments. Why not weigh in every five chapters or so?
Nov 13, 14:09
In all fairness to you, I can’t disagree that parts of it do feel a bit rushed.